NIP-53 Text Refinements and formatting fixes (#2052)

1 files changed, 21 insertions, 28 deletions

diff --git a/53.md b/53.md
index d64f3ef..523a998 100644
--- a/53.md
+++ b/53.md
@@ -6,13 +6,13 @@ Live Activities
 
 `draft` `optional`
 
-Service providers want to offer live activities to the Nostr network in such a way that participants can easily log and query by clients. This NIP describes a general framework to advertise the involvement of pubkeys in such live activities.
+This NIP introduces event kinds to advertise live spaces and the participation of pubkeys in them.
 
-## Concepts
+## Live Streaming
 
-### Live Event
+A special event with `kind:30311` "Live Streaming Event" is defined as an _addressable event_ whose tags advertise the content and participats of a live stream. 
 
-A special event with `kind:30311` "Live Event" is defined as an _addressable event_ of public `p` tags. Each `p` tag SHOULD have a **displayable** marker name for the current role (e.g. `Host`, `Speaker`, `Participant`) of the user in the event and the relay information MAY be empty. This event will be constantly updated as participants join and leave the activity.
+Each `p` tag SHOULD have a **displayable** marker name for the current role (e.g. `Host`, `Speaker`, `Participant`) of the user in the event and the relay information MAY be empty. This event will be constantly updated as participants join and leave the activity.
 
 For example:
 
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ Event `kind:1311` is live chat's channel message. Clients MUST include the `a` t
 {
   "kind": 1311,
   "tags": [
-    ["a", "30311:<Community event author pubkey>:<d-identifier of the community>", "<Optional relay url>", "root"],
+    ["a", "30311:<Community event author pubkey>:<d-identifier of the community>", "<Optional relay url>"],
   ],
   "content": "Zaps to live streams is beautiful.",
   // other fields...
@@ -84,13 +84,9 @@ Event `kind:1311` is live chat's channel message. Clients MUST include the `a` t
 
 Hosts may choose to pin one or more live chat messages by updating the `pinned` tags in the live event kind `30311`.
 
-## Use Cases
+### Examples
 
-Common use cases include meeting rooms/workshops, watch-together activities, or event spaces, such as [zap.stream](https://zap.stream).
-
-## Example
-
-### Live Streaming
+#### Live Streaming
 
 ```json
 {
@@ -114,7 +110,7 @@ Common use cases include meeting rooms/workshops, watch-together activities, or
 }
 ```
 
-### Live Streaming chat message
+#### Live Streaming chat message
 
 ```json
 {
@@ -130,18 +126,13 @@ Common use cases include meeting rooms/workshops, watch-together activities, or
 }
 ```
 
-## Interactive Rooms and Meetings
------
-
-`draft` `optional`
+## Meeting Spaces
 
-Service providers want to offer Interactive Rooms to the Nostr network in such a way that participants can easily log and query by clients. This NIP describes a general framework to advertise rooms and their associated events.
+Meeting spaces contain one or more video/audio rooms where users can join and participate in the streaming.
 
-## Concepts
+### Meeting Space Event (kind:30312)
 
-### Interactive Room (kind:30312)
-
-A special event with `kind:30312` "Interactive Room" defines the configuration and properties of a virtual interactive space. Each room has a unique identifier and can host multiple events/meetings.
+A special event with `kind:30312` "Space Host" defines the configuration and properties of a virtual interactive space. Each space has a unique identifier and can host multiple events/meetings.
 
 ```jsonc
 {
@@ -162,19 +153,20 @@ A special event with `kind:30312` "Interactive Room" defines the configuration a
 }
 ```
 
-Room properties:
+Space properties:
 * MUST be either open, private or closed. Closed means the room is not in operation.
 * MAY specify access control policy for private rooms (e.g. invite-only, payment required)
 * MAY persist when not in use
 * MUST have at least one provider with "Host" role
 * MAY have multiple providers with different roles
+
 Provider roles (p tags):
 * Host: Full room management capabilities
 * Moderator: Room moderation capabilities
 * Speaker: Allowed to present/speak
 * Optional proof field for role verification
 
-### Room Meeting (kind:30313)
+### Meeting Room Events (kind:30313)
 
 A special event with kind:30313 represents a scheduled or ongoing meeting within a room. It MUST reference its parent room using the d tag.
 
@@ -183,7 +175,7 @@ A special event with kind:30313 represents a scheduled or ongoing meeting within
   "kind": 30313,
   "tags": [
     ["d", "<event-unique-identifier>"],        // Required: Event identifier
-    ["a", "30312:<pubkey>:<room-id>", "wss://nostr.example.com"], // Required: Reference to parent room, 'd' from 30312
+    ["a", "30312:<pubkey>:<room-id>", "wss://nostr.example.com"], // Required: Reference to parent space, 'd' from 30312
     ["title", "<meeting-title>"],              // Required: Meeting title
     ["summary", "<description>"],              // Optional: Meeting description
     ["image", "<preview image url>"],          // Optional: Meeting image
@@ -204,14 +196,15 @@ Event properties:
 * MUST have a start time
 * MAY track participant counts
 * MAY include participant roles specific to the event
+
 Event management:
 * Clients SHOULD update event status regularly when live
 * Events without updates for 1 hour MAY be considered ended
 * starts and ends timestamps SHOULD be updated when status changes
 
-Examples
+### Examples
 
-Interactive Room (kind:30312)
+#### Meeting Space (kind:30312)
 
 ```jsonc
 {
@@ -233,7 +226,7 @@ Interactive Room (kind:30312)
 }
 ```
 
-Conference Event (kind:30313)
+#### Meeting room (kind:30313)
 
 ```jsonc
 {
@@ -254,7 +247,7 @@ Conference Event (kind:30313)
   "content": ""
 }
 ```
-## Room Presence
+### Room Presence
 
 New `kind: 10312` provides an event which signals presence of a listener.