NIP-72: reformat and clarify some things.

1 files changed, 22 insertions, 22 deletions

diff --git a/72.md b/72.md
index 833336c..74c7f08 100644
--- a/72.md
+++ b/72.md
@@ -10,16 +10,15 @@ The goal of this NIP is to create moderator-approved public communities around a
 
 # Community Definition
 
-`Kind:34550` SHOULD include any field that helps define the community and the set of moderators. `relay` tags MAY be used to describe the preferred relay to download requests and approvals.
+`kind:34550` SHOULD include any field that helps define the community and the set of moderators. `relay` tags MAY be used to describe the preferred relay to download requests and approvals.
 
 ```json
 {
-  "id": "<32-bytes lowercase hex-encoded SHA-256 of the the serialized event data>",
-  "pubkey": "<32-bytes lowercase hex-encoded public key of the event creator>",
+  ...
   "created_at": <Unix timestamp in seconds>,
   "kind": 34550,
   "tags": [
-    ["d", "<Community name>"],
+    ["d", "<community-d-identifier>"],
     ["description", "<Community description>"],
     ["image", "<Community image url>", "<Width>x<Height>"],
 
@@ -41,18 +40,16 @@ The goal of this NIP is to create moderator-approved public communities around a
 
 # New Post Request
 
-Any Nostr event can be a post request. Clients MUST add the community's `a` tag to the new post event in order to be presented for the moderator's approval.
+Any Nostr event can be submitted to a community by anyone for approval. Clients MUST add the community's `a` tag to the new post event in order to be presented for the moderator's approval.
 
 ```json
 {
-  "id": "<32-bytes lowercase hex-encoded SHA-256 of the the serialized event data>",
-  "pubkey": "<32-bytes lowercase hex-encoded public key of the event creator>",
-  "created_at": <Unix timestamp in seconds>,
+  ...
   "kind": 1,
   "tags": [
-    ["a", "34550:<Community event author pubkey>:<d-identifier of the community>", "<Optional relay url>"],
+    ["a", "34550:<community event author pubkey>:<community-d-identifier>", "<optional-relay-url>"],
   ],
-  "content": "<My content>"
+  "content": "hello world"
 }
 ```
 
@@ -64,17 +61,16 @@ The post-approval event MUST include `a` tags of the communities the moderator i
 
 ```json
 {
-  "id": "<32-bytes lowercase hex-encoded SHA-256 of the the serialized event data>",
+  ...
   "pubkey": "<32-bytes lowercase hex-encoded public key of the event creator>",
-  "created_at": <Unix timestamp in seconds>,
   "kind": 4550,
   "tags": [
-    ["a", "34550:<Community event author pubkey>:<d-identifier of the community>", "<Optional relay url>"],
-    ["e", "<Post Request ID>", "<Optional relay url>"],
-    ["p", "<Post Request Author ID>", "<Optional relay url>"],
-    ["k", "<New Post Request kind>"],
+    ["a", "34550:<event-author-pubkey>:<community-d-identifier>", "<optional-relay-url>"],
+    ["e", "<post-id>", "<optional-relay-url>"],
+    ["p", "<port-author-pubkey>", "<optional-relay-url>"],
+    ["k", "<post-request-kind>"]
   ],
-  "content": "<New Post Request JSON>"
+  "content": "<the full approved event, JSON-encoded>"
 }
 ```
 
@@ -91,11 +87,15 @@ Community clients SHOULD display posts that have been approved by at least 1 mod
 The following filter displays the approved posts.
 
 ```js
-{
-  "authors": ["<Author pubkey>", "<Moderator1 pubkey>", "<Moderator2 pubkey>", "<Moderator3 pubkey>", ...],
-  "kinds": [4550],
-  "#a": ["34550:<Community event author pubkey>:<d-identifier of the community>"],
-}
+[
+  "REQ",
+  "_",
+  {
+    "authors": ["<owner-pubkey>", "<moderator1-pubkey>", "<moderator2-pubkey>", "<moderator3-pubkey>", ...],
+    "kinds": [4550],
+    "#a": ["34550:<Community event author pubkey>:<d-identifier of the community>"],
+  }
+]
 ```
 
 Clients MAY hide approvals by blocked moderators at the user's request.