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@@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ Picture-first feeds
 
 `draft` `optional`
 
-This NIP defines event kind `20` for picture-first clients. Images must be self-contained. They are hosted externally and referenced using `imeta` tags
+This NIP defines event kind `20` for picture-first clients. Images must be self-contained. They are hosted externally and referenced using `imeta` tags.
 
-Unlike a `kind 1` event with a pircture attached, Picture events are meant to contain all additional metadata concerning the subject media and to be surfaced in picture-specific clients rather than general micro-blogging clients. The thought is for events of this kind to be referenced in a Instagram/Flickr/Snapshat/9gag like nostr client where the picture itself is at the center of the experience.
+The idea is for this type of event to cater to Nostr clients resembling platforms like Instagram, Flickr, Snapchat, or 9GAG, where the picture itself takes center stage in the user experience.
 
 ## Picture Events
 
@@ -60,6 +60,8 @@ They may contain multiple images to be displayed as a single post.
 
     // Specify the media type for filters to allow clients to filter by supported kinds
     ["m", "image/jpeg"],
+
+    // Hashes of each image to make them queryable
     ["x", "<sha256>"]
 
     // Hashtags
@@ -87,4 +89,4 @@ Only the following media types are accepted:
 - `image/png`: Portable Network Graphics (PNG)
 - `image/webp`: Web Picture format (WEBP)
 
-Picture events might be used with [NIP-71](71.md)'s kind `34236` to display short vertical videos in the same feed.
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+Picture events might be used with [NIP-71](71.md)'s kind `34236` to display short vertical videos in the same feed.