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@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ Moderated Communities (Reddit Style)
 
 `draft` `optional`
 
-The goal of this NIP is to create moderator-approved public communities around a topic. It defines the replaceable event `kind:34550` to define the community and the current list of moderators/administrators. Users that want to post into the community, simply tag any Nostr event with the community's `a` tag. Moderators issue an approval event `kind:4550` that links the community with the new post.
+The goal of this NIP is to enable public communities. It defines the replaceable event `kind:34550` to define the community and the current list of moderators/administrators. Users that want to post into the community, simply tag any Nostr event with the community's `a` tag. Moderators may issue an approval event `kind:4550`.
 
 # Community Definition
 
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ The goal of this NIP is to create moderator-approved public communities around a
 }
 ```
 
-# Community Posts
+# Posting to a community
 
 Any Nostr event can be posted to a community. Clients MUST add one or more community `a` tags, each with a recommended relay.
 
@@ -56,6 +56,8 @@ Any Nostr event can be posted to a community. Clients MUST add one or more commu
 
 # Moderation
 
+Anyone may issue an approval event to express their opinion that a post is appropriate for a community. Clients MAY choose which approval events to honor, but SHOULD at least use ones published by the group's defined moderators.
+
 An approval event MUST include one or more community `a` tags, an `e` or `a` tag pointing to the post, and the `p` tag of the author of the post (for approval notifications). `a` tag prefixes can be used to disambiguate between community and replaceable event pointers (community `a` tags always begin with `34550`).
 
 The event SHOULD also include the JSON-stringified `post request` event inside the `.content`, and a `k` tag with the original post's event kind to allow filtering of approved posts by kind.
@@ -90,23 +92,3 @@ Since relays are instructed to delete old versions of a replaceable event, the `
 # Cross-posting
 
 Clients MAY support cross-posting between communities by posting a NIP 18 `kind 6` or `kind 16` repost to one or more communities using `a` tags as described above. The `content` of the repost MUST be the original event, not the approval event.
-
-# Displaying
-
-Clients SHOULD display posts that have been approved by at least 1 moderator or by the community owner. Clients MAY disregard moderation and fetch community posts directly.
-
-The following filter displays the approved posts.
-
-```json
-[
-  "REQ",
-  "_",
-  {
-    "authors": ["<owner-pubkey>", "<moderator1-pubkey>", "<moderator2-pubkey>", "<moderator3-pubkey>", ...],
-    "kinds": [4550],
-    "#a": ["34550:<Community event author pubkey>:<d-identifier of the community>"],
-  }
-]
-```
-
-Clients MAY hide approvals by blocked moderators at the user's request.